Convincing My School Principal(?)

Eugene

Korea

2013/8/8

Dear Mr. Kim(Principal)

 I am writing this letter because I believe that private education is important and help us to study well. Many experts like Mr. Park,  for example agree with me. I will explain reasons for this and give facts to support my opinion.

 The first reason is because I can Experience various education system. There are facts to show this is true. According to Mrs. Siena, her child, who is the middle school student, couldn't understand the lectures that she attended in the school. But, after she attended the academy, she experienced different education type and she could understand better than in the school. 

 The second reason is because school can't produce many information that I want. Schools don't produce the information specifically and definitely. My school has only one foreign teacher. Are you sure that he can teach all students to improve their pronunciation and speaking ability? Also, the schools' English programs are extremely low. I can't  get any fresh information form my school.

 The final reason is because I can learn the subjects more specifically and more directly. When we attend to academies or personal lectures in the house, we can learn it more directly than the school. Because, in school, usually teachers teach above thirty students in one time. So, they can't teach us as well as you think. But, in academies or the personal lecture one by one or one by under ten. So, they can focus on one student.

 As you can see, the private education is important and help us to study well more than you think. Based on my arguments, I hope you will consider my point of view that attending academy is not a wasting money.

 Thank you.

Sincerely,
Eugene oh

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